after the cut
I took out 2200+ words and added 700+. This is less event-y but more consistent with the story.
I keep wondering, what if I could trackback my life and see where I made a blunder and track back to that point? Or do I just keep plodding on, hoping for a second draft? But since nobody gave me an outline or at least some character sheets, the hope for 2nd draft is pretty slim. Whoever’s making this is so damn sure he knows what he’s doing and he’s getting everything just right as it is.
Well I got news for you, mr. Pantser.
